Trailer

This was the version of my film trailer that I have showed to the people who gave me comments.

After showing it to some more people I will do the following changes to my film trailer:

1. I will remove the shot of the female protagonist as it zzoms in as it appears to show her laughing.

2. I will also hold the shot of the two army officials for longer, to establish them as characters.

3. I will also add in titles of the two main characters, Georgia Higgins. It is also worth mentioning at this point that I have changed the character names on the movie poster. it now says Steven Thurley, Georgia Higgins and Max Nordigian.

4. I am also going to have to look at the music of my film, as currently there could be a copywright problem with the 'Your Song' music I have got in the background. As an alternative I will look for a non-copywright instrumental version or another version of the same song that is not under any copywright laws.

5. I will also remove the repeated close up shot of the two as it is unecesasry and looks repeptitive.